Hiii let me introduce my self...
Hiiii,My name is Almira Rahmanafi. You can call me Almira. I was born in Jombang 30th April 1996. Now, iam a teenager haha.I was graduated from Twent Senior High Scool Surabaya. So many memories when iam at senior high school but life must go on and now Im proud to be a colleg student at Electronic Enginering Polytehcnic Institut of Surabaya on Multimedia Broadcasting.This campus is known like a jungle hahaa. but Iam happy can study here and be part of Multimedia Creative.I proud met with people who are creative and my frinds in there would to tech me.
I have family my father's name Nurwalid. He always teach me about religion.Iam proud with because he always love me and my family. My mother's name Christin.She is house wife.She is my everything. She always to be make her family happy. I have brother and sister. My brother name's Hafizh,he is 14 years old. Now,he is grade 9 at one junior hight school waru sidoarjo.He like playing game so much and my little sister name's Atha she is 12 years old,and she is grade 7 at the same school with hafizh.She like reading novel and listening music.I love my family so much.
My hobbies are watching movie,eating,and hang out with my friends. I like to tasting a new food like a wastern,indonesian food,or arabian food. I like watching romantic and advanture movie.Sometimes i have to hang out with my friends, i always happy with my friends.We can smile and laugh together and they always help me and make me happy anytime,anywhere,and anything. I started friendship since high school and i hope will be forever.
Well,in the future i will make my parents and my family proud of me,and always make them happy forever. And i wish that i can continue to be higher my study.
That's little story about me,this is me?how about you?:))
13 comments
i think your sentences line 8. it should be "romantic" hehe ^^
i like watching movie also. but i don't like scary movie
that is too short story i think you should improve your story like hobby or family or job or your love story or anything HAHAHA
i think we have a similar hobby and wishes, i like watch a romantic movie and i wish to make my parents proud of me :)
objection, it is "my hobbies are ... "
miraaa your description is too short.-. bytheway i like hangout too:3
about this sentences "I have family My father name's Nurwalid. My mother name's Christin. I have brother and sister. My brother name's Hafizh ", why is it different with "my sister name Atha" in terms of use word "name" and "name's " ?? i think it would be better if you revise " my father's name is....., my mother's name is...., etc"
oke thanks ;)
I think..
Surely u've interesting story, please tell more. It's too short.
And think u've wrong gramatical in this sentence :
"I have family My father name's Nurwalid. My mother name's Christin. I have brother and sister. My brother name's Hafizh and my sister name Atha."
Right :
"I have family. My father's name is Nurwalid. My mother's name is Christin. I have brother and sister. My brother's name is Hafizh and my sister's name is Atha."
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your blog is so clean and simple >< I feel so comfort being here ahaha kidding~ about your post :D I like it
almira, I have to revision in your paragraph 2 "My hobbys is ...."must be "my hobbys are"
aloha aaaal^^
your story is too short and many typo's word hehe:D
more carefully next time sista *aja aja hwaiting
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your story is too short al... :')
but i like your mind map ^^
keep fighting^^
I like this blog's template, a little crowdy thou. :D
almira.... nice blog!
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